Narratives

 Enjoy reading our narratives. We will be reading these aloud.

 Our narratives included the following:

Planning in pictorial form

Including information about setting.

Writing a sequence of events.

Focusing on one or two characters and their actions.

Writing a simple ending.

 Once on Christmas Eve Santa made a dinosaur be Santa for a change with a t-rex for Rudolph.

The dinosaur tried to get down the chimney but he was so fat so the chucked the presents down the chimney.

The next morning it took too long for him to get out come out to give me my presents.

The next time he went out the door the t-rex was asleep for half the night. He roared at me. It was cool with all the presents for next year.

       Robbie

The dinosaur asked the snake ‘Let’s have a race so they started the race.

When the race started they both moved very slow.

Cole R

Once upon a time there was a cottage made of wood. Along came the girl called Goldilocks.

She didn’t know that there were three bears living in that cottage. They were just on a walk in the woods and out of the woods and walked home to eat their porridge.

When they came back the three bears said,"Whose been eating my porridge?” Baby bear said”, Someone’s been eating my porridge and they have eaten it all up. Baby bear cried for two minutes and then he stopped.

He heard something upstairs ‘Someone is sleeping in my bed. “ It was a girl with gold hair. She jumped out of bead and ran away.

Hunter.

There was a T-Rex , a Spinosauraus and a volcano.

The Spinosauraus survived and the t-rex did not survive and after that when the t- rex died and blocked the volcano and after all that the rest of the dinosaurs survived.

Ryan

Once upon a time there was a volcano and a dinosaur. They lived in a desert….AAAAAhhh the volcano exploded!

Later they ran off to a castle and they were safe.

 But the larva went on the castle but they survived and they lived happily ever after.

Jimmy

 Once upon a time there was a lion and a boy. The lion got caught in a net.The boy helped the lion get out of the net because the boy had a wee knife to cut the net.

 So the lion and the boy were friends.

 Ben  

Once there were three little pigs. The first little pig made a house out of straw. Then the big bad wolf blew it down.

 The pig ran to the second house . Along came the wolf, “Let me in,” said the wolf. “No”, said the pig.

  He blew the house down that was made of sticks.

  They ran to the brother’s house whose house was made of   bricks.

Caleb

 Once there were two worms. Two worms were racing

 They were trying to set out of the ground and finally they got out.  One couldn’t get out.

 One got caught and then the  next day the other go out

 Malachi

Once upon a time in a jungle there lived a king and a robber. The robber came along and said, “I am going to have this castle. We will have to have a competition. Whoever wins gets the castle and I will get everything.

I will be famous. I will have thousands of dollars and I will be king.

 I will have the crown and the thousands of crystals and my house will be shiny and colorful. The war may start in 7-6-5-4-3-2-1-0. The war is on!

 Tim.

The dinosaur zapped the lion because the lion wanted the sword.

The lion fell to sleep.

The dinosaur walked away with the sword.

Cole H

I am in snow with my Mum and my family.

We are making a snowman with a blue nose and I made a dog and a cat.

 Then I made a hole and a hill.

 Alex

Once upon a time there was a dragon and a snake.

    The snake is a king cobra.

    The dragon is a night fairy. He never misses. He never      shows himself. He never steals food.

  The dragon and the snake live happily ever after

  Sam

It was a sunny day. There was a tortoise and a hare.

They were having a race. The hare was in the lead.

Then the hare took a nap. Then the tortoise was in the lead now. The hare woke up and the tortoise won the race!

Jack

Lion and tiger are fighting and sleeping in the forest.

Conna

The hare and the tortoise started the race and the hare was in the lead.

The hare took a nap and then the tortoise got in the lead.

Then the hare woke up and the tortoise was already at the finish line. The hare cried, ‘Waa waa-waaaaa”.

Matthew

Once upon a time there was a mouse and a lion.

The lion got trapped in the hunters’ trap and the mouse helped him out.

Thomas

RTD2 and Luke Skywalker blew up the star with a bomb.

They hit Darvader on his tail and Darvader went spinning into space.

Jacob.

 In a desert there lived snakes and dinosaurs.

The snakes were beating the dinosaurs but the snake poisoned the dinosaurs. They both died.

In eleven years all of the dinosaurs died. All there was left was darkness and wet sand.

One day lightening struck the middle of the earth. Then at night fairy the dragons came. Then the hole as covered with night fairy dragons!

Markus

Elephant and Santa

Once upon a time there was an elephant and Santa. The elephant has a red nose.

They were making toys. They were happy but then something was scaring them. It was really scary!

It was an evil chicken with one thousand legs and one thousand and ninety nine heads!

They ran away. They got their toys and ran away.

Kyron

One day there were some mice playing hide and seek. The mouse went in the cave. He woke up the lion. Then the lion picked up the mouse. The mouse said,” One day I will help you.”

 “Help me! “,said the lion. “You can’t help me. I’m the king of the jungle and you’re a just a little mouse”, said the mouse.

 He ran away. The next day the mouse heard a Roar!!!!!!

“That must be the lion caught”, said the Lion.

“He must be in trouble.”

He went to the lion’s cave. He saw the lion was trapped. Then he saved him.

Fabian

A boy was walking .He found a castle. He went in. He saw a king with a with a lazer sword. He had an army to fight with him. He defeated the king.

Josh